Poor Imp

Yes, I liked it. And the child's complexity - that makes some sense with your remark; they all seemed at the level of 'children' in one sense, Mama, Papa and ...

Moved from Storybooks to Poetry

Spaces, perhaps? The forum tends to be impossible in making anything intelligable that hasn't got double-spaces between paragraphs. Space it out, and without a doubt, you'll get some good critiques. ...

For the record, RADA stands for Royal Academy of Dramatic Art. It's an English dramatics it probably has no place in the story, but I couldn't think of another one ...

Thanks Kaolin. Writing more fanfiction? or something out of your own head entirely? ^_^ Either way, good luck with it--and if you need any comments, feel free to PM me. ...

I won't repeat Kay--she's said what's best said, you know. ^_^ Same about the scripts/fanfiction. Moved

Merci, both of you. Imp, This is my novella, so there will be much more, so you might get a batter feel of the story once I post more. In ...

BFG has a good point. ^_^ Moved .

It's a brilliant book. ^_^ And the genre oughtn't be Christian. It's really satire first, then theological. Though, doubtless, Lewis was a Christian writer.

Hullo Plus--I'm back, somewhat, to make longer remarks. ^_^ My first post stands, of course. It was even more trouble when your PA was on some sort of extended maternity ...

Moved to Fanfiction

Thanks DD. Oy, I hate writing tired--it makes it difficult to catch your own mistakes. #_# That, of course, is why I'm fortunate to have you and others around. ^_^

Hullo Eccentric--you've edited; and I promised. There's a lot a of good information in all this, good background and myth for a fantasy world and culture. (It wavers on the ...

second half, chp. 1 Note: It was meant to be together with the first--but it was too terribly mixed up to post. It still is. Both pieces being fit with ...

Ah, take the ideas and make them poetry, Alanna. For now, this is moved .